Started as a sketch, taken into Illustrator to clean up. I feel like the line width is a little unruly on the "goes free" half. Any critique anyone has about letter forms, line width, composition, etc. are more than welcome.
Since you seem to be suggesting an eternity symbol here, the words "my" and "goes" need a bit of tweaking to make them add to the curviness of the baseline (particularly "goes"). I know someone mentioned the "goes" issue elsewhere but I don't think they mentioned the flat baseline of the "my". Also, should "e" in the "ve" and the "oe" perhaps look closer stylistically? The "oe" has a more free and whimsical feeling; you might need to alter the "v" in order for that "e" to have the same effect (if that makes any sense).
I really like the composition over all. The font itself does the job of suggesting ease and freedom. A bit more curve to those flat spots will help nail the intent.